Post by legoman0991 on Apr 17, 2006 19:13:22 GMT -5
Thats what I'm calling it for now it kind of seems lam though I can think of a better name once I get more of the story in my head and theres going to be a suprize to what the sword is latter on infact the fight part is going to reveal a bit about what the sword is and I don't want to give any more away so enjoy 
Our story starts out with a young man of sixteen named Théoden. Théoden was a strong boy with broad shoulders and big build. Théoden was the man of the house since his father was fighting in the troll wars. He was plowing potatoes when his sister Setreeah called him to come to the house, Setreeah was tall and beautiful with a definitive chin and strong voice. Théoden walked over to the house careful not to step on any of his mother’s cabbage plants, all the while knowing what was in store for him. As he opened the door the merry voices of his family and friends rang through the air “happy Birthday!” they shouted. Warmly excepting every one he opened his presents receiving among other things a new Elvin dagger from his mother and a new shirt from his sister that she had made herself he also got many new tools for working in his father’s field. The time grew late and all his guests started to leave all save one. An old woman draped in a fine cloak sitting in the corner stood up and starts coming toward the bewildered family. Théoden’s mother asked the old woman who she was, the old woman replied that she was Théoden’s Aunt and had brought him a present. His Aunt said “I have only met you once before when you were but a child do you remember? No, I suppose not, my husband your uncle and your father’s brother has pasted away, he told me to give you this sword when the time was right and this is the time”. She gave him what she was hiding under her rich cloak, Théoden receiving the sword unsheathed it, his sister and mother gasped as the sword seemed to be giving out its own aura of light. Théoden looked up to ask the old woman were she got such a sword but she was gone. He asked his mother what she was doing there and she replied “I do not know of any brother of your fathers”. The sword still seeming to glow was put back into its sheath, they disgust what to do with the sword and it was decided to put it up in the rafters of the barn since the value of it was unknown. After a hearty supper Théoden went to the barn and tied the sword to a middle rafter.
The next day while Théoden was in the field he heard his sister scream, alarmed knowing that his sister did not scream over anything ran as fast as he could toward the sound he reached the barn stopping to see if she would again scream, there was no sound. It seamed to quiet he started to go around the barn when he heard a gruff voice say “where is the sword?” Théoden froze put his back against the barn and listened with great intent. The voice came again “where is the sword?” he then heard his sister say “I don’t know what you are talking about” the unknown voice answered “Oh yes you do little missy and were not leaving until we get it I know she was here last night”. Théoden now aware there was more than one person in the barn started to look around thinking there might be more just then the voice came again “If your brother doesn’t get here soon were going to have to do something about finding that sword our selves and if he doesn’t give us that sword were going to have to kill you my dear”. Upon hearing this fear crept into Théoden’s heart, he must give them that sword but how to get to it with out them seeing him was the problem. He ran around to the back of the barn and started to clime the ladder leading into the hay loft he climbed yet another ladder and untied the sword from the rafter. Just then the unknown voice said “good lad, now bring it down to me”, the man had been watching him all along. Théoden looked down and saw the man he was extremely muscular and had baggy pants and a vest on he was wearing a belt with many knives in it with a long sword on the side, there were also 5 other men with him who were all shapes and sizes one being particularly fat compared to the other bandits.
And parts are subject to change thats all I got howd you like it?
Our story starts out with a young man of sixteen named Théoden. Théoden was a strong boy with broad shoulders and big build. Théoden was the man of the house since his father was fighting in the troll wars. He was plowing potatoes when his sister Setreeah called him to come to the house, Setreeah was tall and beautiful with a definitive chin and strong voice. Théoden walked over to the house careful not to step on any of his mother’s cabbage plants, all the while knowing what was in store for him. As he opened the door the merry voices of his family and friends rang through the air “happy Birthday!” they shouted. Warmly excepting every one he opened his presents receiving among other things a new Elvin dagger from his mother and a new shirt from his sister that she had made herself he also got many new tools for working in his father’s field. The time grew late and all his guests started to leave all save one. An old woman draped in a fine cloak sitting in the corner stood up and starts coming toward the bewildered family. Théoden’s mother asked the old woman who she was, the old woman replied that she was Théoden’s Aunt and had brought him a present. His Aunt said “I have only met you once before when you were but a child do you remember? No, I suppose not, my husband your uncle and your father’s brother has pasted away, he told me to give you this sword when the time was right and this is the time”. She gave him what she was hiding under her rich cloak, Théoden receiving the sword unsheathed it, his sister and mother gasped as the sword seemed to be giving out its own aura of light. Théoden looked up to ask the old woman were she got such a sword but she was gone. He asked his mother what she was doing there and she replied “I do not know of any brother of your fathers”. The sword still seeming to glow was put back into its sheath, they disgust what to do with the sword and it was decided to put it up in the rafters of the barn since the value of it was unknown. After a hearty supper Théoden went to the barn and tied the sword to a middle rafter.
The next day while Théoden was in the field he heard his sister scream, alarmed knowing that his sister did not scream over anything ran as fast as he could toward the sound he reached the barn stopping to see if she would again scream, there was no sound. It seamed to quiet he started to go around the barn when he heard a gruff voice say “where is the sword?” Théoden froze put his back against the barn and listened with great intent. The voice came again “where is the sword?” he then heard his sister say “I don’t know what you are talking about” the unknown voice answered “Oh yes you do little missy and were not leaving until we get it I know she was here last night”. Théoden now aware there was more than one person in the barn started to look around thinking there might be more just then the voice came again “If your brother doesn’t get here soon were going to have to do something about finding that sword our selves and if he doesn’t give us that sword were going to have to kill you my dear”. Upon hearing this fear crept into Théoden’s heart, he must give them that sword but how to get to it with out them seeing him was the problem. He ran around to the back of the barn and started to clime the ladder leading into the hay loft he climbed yet another ladder and untied the sword from the rafter. Just then the unknown voice said “good lad, now bring it down to me”, the man had been watching him all along. Théoden looked down and saw the man he was extremely muscular and had baggy pants and a vest on he was wearing a belt with many knives in it with a long sword on the side, there were also 5 other men with him who were all shapes and sizes one being particularly fat compared to the other bandits.
And parts are subject to change
thats all I got howd you like it?
and it would be "Theoden could you come inside" 
